E P Collier

Primary School and Nursery

Nurture. Discover. Achieve.


Today you will edit and redraft your newspaper reports. You have previously seen how real authors, like J.K.Rowling, edit and redraft their work many times to improve it.

You can use any of the templates provided or you can make your own, but you must improve your work by using the feature list to see what words/phrases you could include. The more changes you make the more points you will score on the tally chart!

Use the tally chat to see how many points you get when you have finished your article. Who will get the most?

Send in your final draft to along with how many points you have scored

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