E P Collier

Primary School and Nursery

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Miss Pope's editing video is below as a YouTube link because the file is too big to upload here. 


If you can't see YouTube, then today's task is to edit your piece of writing.


You need to spend 5 minutes looking at each of these things, and checking they are correct:


  • Spelling
  • Use of expanded noun phrases
  • Use of fronted adverbials
  • Use of varied conjunctions


Photographs of an example of editing and a marked piece of work are also below for you to compare. 



During the editing process and after the editing process

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