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E P Collier

Primary School and Nursery

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Thursday 2nd July 2020

Friday 3rd July 2020

Lesson 9 and 10 

English The TEAR Thief

For Lesson 9 and 10. You will write your own version of The Tear Thief using the planning template you have used to plan your story in five sections. I have  extended this lesson for two days as you can choose how much of your story you want to write today and how much you want to do o Friday to finish the story.

  • Opening
  • Build up
  • Climax 
  • Resolution
  • Ending
  • Use the Power- Point to go through each sections with examples of model write I have completed.
  • Remember to include the skills below in your writing. GOOD LUCK

- Expanded noun phrases - Commas for lists - Homophones -Edit and improve writing